On Mon, 13 May 1996, Skywise (Kelly) wrote:

	It was another fine morning in residential St. Paul, and Conrad 
was walking along oblivious to the outside world.  His nose buried in a 

nose was buried

 need for conscious thought.  Conrad continued on undisturbed at six foot 

undisturbed.  At six 

three not many people tented to bother the rather introverted young man.  

three, not 

Dressed in a typical pair of tan pants with a dark green wind breaker he 

breaker, he

	Something was wrong.  The blond haired high school graduate 
looked up, as he glanced around to take in his surroundings he unconsciously
 replaced his latest book in his ever-present USA cup bag.  Something is

up.  As he glanced around to take in his surroundings, he

	Now  wandering aimlessly and thoughly confused Conrad made his 

thoroughly confused, Conrad

way towards what looked like a highschool.  'maybe there will be an English 

'Maybe

department in there somewhere `he thought as he entered the courtyard intent

somewhere', he thought

 on finding a teacher.  As he passed by various crowds eating lunch he over 
herd enough to recognize that the language they were speaking was Japanese.

he overheard enough

  "well now I know that spending all of that money buying anime wasn't 
completely wasted" he mumbled to himself" at least I can understand about
 one word in ten."

wasted", he mumbled to himself, "at least
 

<Can I help you sir> said a voice casing Con to break out of his thoughts 

you, sir>, said 

and enter the real world.  As he looked up to see who had spoken to him he

him, he 

"let me go find out if it is OK with the principle for me to take you there" she 

"Let me go find out if it is OK with the Principal for me

"The principle says that because I am so far ahead in all of my classes it is OK 
for me to take the rest of the day off to help you get back to the embassy."  as 
she lead him towards a nearby buss shelter at the end of the street she asked" 
Why did you come to Japan? are you an exchange student or just visiting?"

I'm not too sure a Japanese principal would let even Ami do that, but if 
anyone could get away with that, she could :)
 

"Well Um I was planning too come in the second year of college but now I don't 
remember how I got here" was his reply after a few moments of consideration.  

Well, um, I was planning to come in the second year of college, but now I 
don't remember how I got here," was his reply after a few moments of 
consideration.

End of Part one Please tell me how  you like it so far.
Oh and don't bother jumping to conclusions because you will be wrong anyway

Heh.

You are having some grammar and spelling problems, but the plot is 
acceptable...Other than that, we shall see :)

And it's WHEEL of Time, not weel of time, or are we talking two different 
stories? :)


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