At 12:53 AM 5/12/96 +0000, you wrote:

Akane sat in the living room watching TV.

[big snip]

"hahahhah!  What a tomboy!  i can't believe i kept
that up for a whole week!" he snorts and laughs
uproarously.  The girl is angered at having her
emotions so toyed with.

"Ranma, you jerk!"

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"Did she say Ranma?" wondered Akane.

no offense intended :) the tv show is the first 
guess i had as to how the fic would end.  someone 
(no names :>)on irc said i was appalling, i had 
to post it up  here and get more opinions. ^_^

As you obviuasly classify as one of my detractors:

'Get bent!'


:)

really though ^_^ i liked your fic...

signed, phoneynt
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