The Windlilys wrote:
Example of #1: (IMO) Chiesai, a fanfic that had some
excellent character writing, some deeply moving scenes, some
nice romance, and a plot that was utterly crap. Despite
this, I'm beginning to like it because the charaterization
*is* so good.
I take it this is the fic that started your tirade last week? Now, is
the plot crap because it's a genre you don't like (ie. Swords and
Sorcery) or are thier gaping plot holes, continuity problems, ect? Yes,
the ending sucked, but oh well.
Yea, but I like it a lot more now that I've reread it. And I definitely
like the other one I've read (Nightshadow?). Sword and sorcery was
part of the problem (and I do like Anne McCaffrey, but that's about it.)
I just don't feel it's a genre that lends itself to Ranma. However,
my point was that this fic was one I would reread *despite* the plot
problems I had with it. I also hated your villain. But, once again,
those are my prejudices rather than writing problems. I apologize for
the "utter crap" bit. I just had a bad opinion of the fantasy parts (which,
admittedly, drove the plot). The characterization, though, is great
(a *realistic* Nabiki/Kuno romance!!!).
So, I'll give you a topic: which is worse, plot problems but
exceptional characterization, or a great plot but bad
character writings? Discuss.
I'd have to say a great plot with bad characterizations. That is what
hooks readers into any story and fan-fic in particular. The best plot in
the world will not keep readers if within the first few paragraphs
(pages if it's long) the reader goes...yeck! this isn't *insert
character* at all.
I agree.
--Sean Gaffney
--"You git! I thought you were dead! Git git git!" - Benny, No Future