Akane sat in the living room watching TV.

Ranma was there, but his head was currently stuck
in the floor.

"stupid tomboy..." Ranma grumbled.

Akane kicked him once and went back to the
television.

"Waaaah!" the TV roared.

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A girl sits under a tree, her pants torn to shreds.
Her shirt is torn and she has bruises all over her.
There is blood on the ground beneath her.
Another girl approaches her.

"Wh-what happened?"

"These five guys...they...they...ooooh the humanity"

"We've gotta get you to a doctor"

A week passes in 1-1/2 hours, scenes of the victimized 
girl regressing into the mind of a kid, then becoming 
older and older as the show goes on.  she seems to
be getting impatient about something.

finally, at the end, the victim, who was really a boy,
laughs in the girl's face

"hahahhah!  What a tomboy!  i can't believe i kept
that up for a whole week!" he snorts and laughs
uproarously.  The girl is angered at having her
emotions so toyed with.

"Ranma, you jerk!"

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"Did she say Ranma?" wondered Akane.


... 


no offense intended :) the tv show is the first 
guess i had as to how the fic would end.  someone 
(no names :>)on irc said i was appalling, i had 
to post it up  here and get more opinions. ^_^

signed, phoneynt
"our love would come down so naturally,
 we would walk down the aisle of destiny."
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