A very good beginning for the story.  Are you planning to use this a
prologue for a large story?  Or is this going to stand alone.  If you are
going use this as a stand alone, I think that you need tone down the
special abilites of the children.  Thier traits are only needed if you are
going to continue the fanfic.  What happened to the rest of the family?


Phoenix Ikki

Well by now, #2 & #3 should be out.  Both Nabiki and Kasumi got married as
well.  I thought that Nabiki would be tired of Kuno by this time plus she
would be more likely to meet someone more compatable in college.  Nabiki,
btw does indeed love Kurt just in her own way (Think of Fox and David
Zanatos of the Garygoles series).
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Anime Excuse #212: Went  on a  mission with the  Lovely Angels
Anime Excuse #213: Tried to help Linna start her car