This is very good.  The marriage between Konatsu and Ukyou sort of 
surprise me.  Again, I still haven't seem the manga volumes from 31-38, but

from 

everything I heard about Konatsu and Ukyou it seems unlikely that they'll get 
married.  

Well, my thoughts were that after 1. Saving her, 2. Being the one right
there when she woke up had something to do with it.  Plus it wasn't an
overnight thing.  The attempt took place in 1996-97 and Ukyou's marrage in 1999.

Sorry if I sound a bit serious, but I'm a firm believer in writing 
everything consistent to Ranma 1/2.  Otherwise, it was very good.

Especially at 

the end how Akane helped Ukyou.  That fit her personality very well and is

very, 

very good.

I'm glad you liked it.  It just kinda jumpped out at me and I just wrote it
down.
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