An excellent, well thought-out series. The characters, new and old, are
well portrayed and likeable. Particularly admirable is that even with the
current wave of sadfics, the author has refrained from turning this into a
"So-and-So is dead, So-and-So's life is ruined, etc." fic. Everyone seems
to have resolved most of their differences. Enjoyable reading,
entertaining, and easy on the soul.
A couple of things - Where's Ryoga? He seems to have vanished off the
face of the earth, not even a mention of him.
Quiz yourself on the correct usage of punctuation. That was my only
real fault with the story. It suceeds despite this, but correct use of
grammar would push this out of the "good" catagory and into the
"excellent".
Hope to see more of it.
- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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/ \ l Mike Loader - Lincolnite, Amberite, Illuminatus, Discordian,
/ () \ l Journalist, Author, Traveler, Historian, Java Fiend.
/ \ l Trier - LA - LV - Kiev - Reno - Hong Kong. Fnord.
-------- l mloader@scs.unr.edu
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