At 11:46 AM 5/6/96 -0700, you wrote:

I always thought detail was important. Besides, then no one asks me 
questions like "What happened to him?" or "Howcome he didn't say 
anything?" or something like that. I do that little detail stuff to get 
rid of them for a little while. Thanks for your criticism! I have to tell 
you, this is the most positive one I"ve had so far. ^^;Be on the look for 
part II tomorrow. 

A certain amount of detail yes, but that's like saying "As the day started
the sun rose, and as it progressed it got higher, then lower" or "The rain
was very wet"  This is EXCRUCIATING detail...if people like SkyKnight did
that his fics would all be over a meg long!

Aaron Stolz-astolz@direct.ca E-mail me anytime! I'm on for HOURS on end all the 
time, so you might even get a reply soon after you send it! *******************