Nightelf (nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu) presents...

The Circe Project 

Part 4

    "I bring her home."  She gestured to the man next to her.

    Nene begged to differ.  "Her?!?  Trust me, this is a guy."

    The young man smiled as he turned to Nene.  "Pardon me, Nene, but 
could you bring me some hot water?"

    "Sure...what do..."  Realization hit her.  "...ohmygod...linna?"

    "Mm-hmm."

A question:

>From Part 2:

    Her metallic fingers raced across the keyboard to pull up Linna's
readings.  She, like Mackie, changed, but something else happened...
Somehow, the systems were being destroyed...crushed from the inside...as
though the occupant of the suit was too large?  Only one thing could do
that...She pulled up the lifeform readings in the security hold.

So why would Linna changing into a guy crush her suit from the inside?  A
tight fit, yes, but *crushed*?

    "So...where Akane?"

    Ranma shook his head.  "She's...she's gone."  Shampoo looked ready 
to ask further, but thought better of it when she saw the look in his 
eyes..."Mousse?"

    This time it was her turn to mourn.  "Genom..."  He held up a hand, 
indicating he didn't need to hear any more.  

He held up a hand, or *she* did?

    Ranma just rolled his eyes.  "Oboy...Have you learned the Kashuu 
Tenshin Amaguriken yet?"

    Linna's face darkened.  "Yes...that witch kept me in guy-form for 
three weeks...

Which witch?  Is Cologne still around?

By the way, what happened while I was gone?  And who are 
these two?" she asked, gesturing to Mackie and Nodoka.

No comments about why Leon's there?

    Sylia tried to repress her laughter.  "Well...the one with the 
pigtail's Nodoka Hibiki, Ranma's grandfather.  

Uh, don't you mean grandDAUGHTER?

    Sylia went to a console, where she typed a few commands.  The modules 
opened with a hiss, revealing the suits inside.  The first four were 
easily recognizeable: Sylia's blue-and-white, Priss' blue with pink 
pinstripes, Linna's lime-green suit, and Nene's pink and purple outfit.  

Hmmm, what year are we in?  Nene shifted to the mainly-red suit in BGC 8
(late 2033)

The six women 
quickly put the suits on, eager to test them out and take them into 
battle.  

 
And what's Leon doing during all of this?


Very nice. :)  Keep up the good work!

Jeanne Hedge

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