Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][beta] BGC/Ranma: The Circe Project pt. 4
From: jhedge@waterw.com (Jeanne Hedge)
Date: 5/5/1996, 8:30 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Sun, 5 May 1996, Nightelf replied:
On Sun, 5 May 1996, Jeanne Hedge wrote:


No comments about why Leon's there?

Well, she knew Leon...at least by reputation and sight.  She had never seen 
Nodoka or Mackie-chan before this.

Yes, but from Leon's conversation with Priss and Nene at Hot Legs, Priss was
the only one he knew was a KS until then.  Wouldn't Linna be at least a
*little* surprised to see someone who, as far as she knew when she left, had
no idea who the KS were, hanging around the suit room before a job?


Hmmm, what year are we in?  Nene shifted to the mainly-red suit in BGC 8
(late 2033)

Actually, it's fall 2034.  They fell in the springs in April (I know, 
because I made the date in question my birthday) 

Good way to remember things ;)


The six women 
quickly put the suits on, eager to test them out and take them into 
battle.  
 
And what's Leon doing during all of this?


Watching.  They were already in the bodysuits.  (I think I put that in, 
anyway...as I was first describing the group in the room, before Linna 
started banging).

Perhaps I should use the word "hardsuits" in the above snippet, to 
distinguish from the bodysuits they wear underneath.

Well, actually I was wondering if he had some *function* with the KS now, or
was just hanging around with Priss (as usual).



Jeanne Hedge

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