On Sat, 4 May 1996, Peter L. Ward wrote:  Interesting fic here.
Overall, I liked it, but the ending just didn't click for me (even
though it was well-handled).  I just couldn't see Shampoo reacting like
that, but that's a difference in opinion, I guess.  Besides that
sticking point, well done.

I enjoyed it, but definitely the ending felt more like the leading in part
to another chapter or part of the story.  Of course, that's just my
knee-jerk prince-on-a-charger reaction. :)  Plus the minor rational point
of Mousse giving up on Shampoo.  And if Shampoo is now an outcast from her
Amazon tribe, what about Mousse?  Questions, questions - but that's
usually the sign of a good fanfic that I want to read more of it . . .

BTW, is it just me, or are we starting to see a trend of
jilted-fiancee-commits-suicide fics here now that Ranma's come to an end and
the expected decision in it?  ^^;

I believe the solution is to Not Read The End. <BG>  Hey, I haven't!
Believe me, it works very well.  Everything is still possible.  And don't
try sending spoilers, I have a very selective mental capacity to read and
forget instantly which works great as a filter.  It's amazing how fast one
can hit a delete key. <G>

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