Hey, Isabel, I remember you. :)
Ugh.  Ever feel like you've been hit with a ton of bricks?  I do, and 
that's a good thing.  The story, in and of itself, reminds me of Stepping 
Stones, sort of a Shampoo version.  I liked it, very much.  The title is 
a good one...but it doesn't reflect the nature of the story, to me.  I 
can't suggest a better one, though.

Kevin Eav--First Deacon of the Church of Ryouga, Keeper of the Compass, 
                          Member of C.A.S.K.E.T.
email:geist@holly.colostate.edu --  IRC:Ishido at #ranma! -- Ishido@RanmaMUCK
"The world...is a dark and lonely place...beyond hope, beyond care..."-Ryouga
                 Member of Okonomiyaki Addicts Anonymous
"C'mon kiddo.  You've got to *find* Akane.  You really are a pain in the 
                  fanny sometimes, ya know Ryouga?"-Ukyo