Interesting fic here.  Overall, I liked it, but the ending just didn't click 
for me (even though it was well-handled).  I just couldn't see Shampoo reacting 
like that, but that's a difference in opinion, I guess.  Besides that sticking 
point, well done.

BTW, is it just me, or are we starting to see a trend of 
jilted-fiancee-commits-suicide fics here now that Ranma's come to an end and 
the expected decision in it?  ^^;  


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