Yet more good stuff from the elf. I liked it. Nice method of pulling
all the pieces together; having Sham. and Linna show up was both
unexpected and delightful.
   Nodoka is Ranma's grandfather? Was there an acident with a cursed pool
and the Nanban mirror? ;)
   I would have liked to have seen a bit more of Nodoka's training. As it
is, she seems almost two-dimentional.
   One wonders if Shampoo will take up her puruit where she left off. With
a little more decorum, of course...

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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