I would like to say that is this my frist FanFic I have ever written. I
must admit that it is a little boring in the beginning but it gets much
better as it goes on.
The story is about a summer trip to Japan my friends and I take. It just
so happens that we live in the Nerima district and meet up with Ranma and
Co. We then move to Nekomi City and live with Bell-Chan but only AFTER
extensive training with the Ranma gang.
I put it in first person and put myself as the main character with two of
my friends. Please don't avoid my story just because I put a real life
character in it because I am a fictionous character. I mean, I can't put
EVERY little detail about myself in there, can I? So just think of Jack
and his friends as created characters based on myself and my friends. I got
the idea of putting myself in it from reading Brett Handy's "Oh My God!"
fanfic. I did, however, try make it seem like my friends and myself as
much as possible but, being in the Ranmaverse, they had to become unreal
very quick.
I do think that I might have built up the plot slowly. I originally
wanted to have an Anything Goes Martial Arts Track and Field Meet because
Akane likes to run and my friends and I do track but I couldn't think of
any events other than javalin sparring and pole vault balance sparring.
Please keep in mind that this is a Ranma and Oh My Goddess Crossover. I
have been told that my characters are weak and that Jack is a little two
demensional. Please keep in mind that this is my first time making a
creative writing story in a year.
Please send comments, questions, advice and anything else to
jackji@efn.org after reading the story.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Good, noble, resourceful, ingenious, nimble-witted, stalwart, patient,
wise, subtile, shrewd, illustrious, long suffering, great hearted, much
enduring Jack Ji, son of his father, sacker of cities, Purple Axeman of
South Eugene High School, anime and manga otaku, favorite of all.
jackji@efn.org - Jack Ji - http://www.efn.org/~jackji