Joyce, I think I should have stopped reading after I finally 
realized what the "job" was...but I didn't.  And I'm glad I didn't.  
Youve managed to bring across the reality of the situation, and you made 
(me at least) empathize with the character.

Excellent job

						Kirpal

Life is not about "reality"				
						It's about rabid snails

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Youma@Undernet		Malkavian at large	       Chronos@smarty.smart.net

"I will not be pushed, filed, stamped, indexed, briefed, debriefed or numbered."
 - No. 6
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