This is something i started and dunno if i want to complete,
's full of spelling and grammer errors which i'm not worried about,

Your right...my spelling and grammer are horrible, and I noticed a couple 
of things...however the story so far is interesting enough to over 
look bad grammer...

anyone think i over describe stuff? i feel always get lost in
description and when i dont, i feel like its undercooked?

Over describe?  No.  The "Gwenivire(told you I can't spell) looked out the 
window" chapter in book two of "A Once And Future King" was over 
description...I think your doing fine...

(i'm not a big fan of 'scripting' ^_-)

BROTHER!

Well anyway, I hope to see more of this, it was interesting.

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                 Able to disrupt intelegent conversation in a single post
                 Its a bird, its a plane, its a can of spam,
                 No!  Its Junk Male!