Hey Neil, nice story. Hey it's a comment. Okay I can see where in the 
story hair comes in, twice, but where does it rise? Now a real question
: if Ranma leaves the picture box on his desk will not others see it and 
give him grief about it? It is nice that Ranma decides to sort of show 
his affections that way, but I think he would later back slide and try to 
hide it again.  Did Ranma make the necklace?  I have a really hard time 
believing that he went to all that time and trouble doing a nice job on 
it and no one noticed him doing so?  Okay, now write more. 
Now I take an almost solemn vow to almost always C&C, maybe.