gaffney@iconn.net wrote:

[Insert Sadfic here]

Wow, very moving.  Other than the "packs" error, there was only one other question I had.  The part where you said, "Nabiki sat stonefaced.." or something like that... you went on to say, "Nabiki never took grief well, but she knew that Kuno would be charged..."

If Nabiki didn't shed a tear, maybe you should change it to, "Nabiki always..."

That's the only thing I could think of. ^_^
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