Joyce 'Azusa' Torres, Sailor Slacker[SMTP:z3b56@ttacs1.ttu.edu] wrote:

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I really liked the story, but I think the other scouts would help Lita out before she got into so much trouble.  As well, I don't think Nabiki would prey on women like that; she is a modern woman living in a fairly sexist society, and so I don't believe that she'd be involved in business that hurt other women.  (I don't think that selling nudie pictures of Akane and Ranma is the same as selling women...)  Perhaps the anime twist is unnecessary,   or some different characters could be utilized?  I can't suggest any because I don't know too much anime...

But that's just my two bits.
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