Oh no...please...not this...

Okay.  Major plus: You're doing this from a first-person point of view.  
That takes guts, and an intimate understanding of the character, but the 
overall effect, when done right, is breathtaking.  

I'm sorry.  I've never had the desire to read any of the "Aliens v. 
Predator" series or any series like that, so I don't know how the Predator 
character would work in this situation.  About all I can say is to keep
it lively, make it one heck of a fight, and keep up the good work.  

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