Subject: Re: [FanFic] Phoney's *Ryoga's F'ing Gun* Part III:Size Counts
From: PhoneyNT
Date: 4/28/1996, 3:57 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

- Turn it into a kind of comedy, where you play off the blatant 
 non-sexuality of Ranma in the series.  Perhaps Akane and Shampoo are 
 coming on to him like mad, but even as he imagines himself a 
 mack, he's unable to realize they're coming on to him/unable to deal 
 with it.

that's what i'm thinking about doing.

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START SNIPPET:

"Ranma?  Please?  Don't be bashful."

"B-but...but...what's with you all of a sudden?"

"You.  You're with me."

"Wh-what?" Ranma stammered, looking at the leather whip in his hand.
"I-I ..."

"Hurry up," Akane moaned aloud, then, thinking, "Once he gets into this,
his ass is MINE!"

"O-okay..." with that, Ranma pulled the tool back, Akane could hear the
whoosing of air as he brought it down, she braced herself...and heard
a clattering.

"Eh?" Akane wondered aloud, turned around, and saw the whip on the ground,
the door was in the process of swinging shut with the wind Ranma had
created on his exit.

:END SNIPPET

(Well, whatcha think?  Major Cheesiness?)

**

- Make Akane fall in the spring of Drowned Octupus.  This would limit 
 Akane to having sex only eight times in her life (once for each arm). 

uh ^_^ right(that makes NO sense to me ^^)
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