On reccomendation from someone else, I'm sending my Sailor Moon fan 
fiction to this list. Please tell me what you find _wrong_ with it and 
how it could be improved. I hope you're familiar with the characters or 
the show in some way, because it was intended for a fan audience and 
people who haven't seen the anime may not get any of this. I'm not sure; 
no one who's not an SM fan has commented to me about the fanfic.

Watch out for names - I play fast and loose.

The timeline is after the Sailor Moon R series. It includes some stuff 
from the first series.

Besides that, just tell me what you think of the story. I need some good 
comments. I wasn't satisfied with part 2, though; so I worked really 
hard on the last two parts.

Well, anyway, I hope you enjoy this.

Hino Rei