This turning into a lemon, sonny?
    Regardless, it's quite funny, keep it up.

a lemon? no...

     Well, with the goings on, it did seem to be heading that way. I was
just curious, but then there's the means that Bert used--lead up to the
scene, but don't describe it.

but speaking of lemon, i'm thinkin' about giving up The Attractiveness 
Factor. these last 2 fics i write something cool and then screwed up 
majorly. don't wanna do that for the third.

     Well, I really like TAF so far. Though I only have one part to it.
Don't stop it, please (esp. if Martial Arts isn't being worked on for a
while) :(
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Ben Kosse bmk7411@cs.rit.edu
BGC Otaku and worshipper of the Red-Eyed Goddess and her music.
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Author of the Bubblegum Crisis theme pack (see the homepage below).
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