On Fri, 26 Apr 1996, Scott Johnson wrote:

Excellent story - I've just got to add a comment or two of my own.
Shouldn't Molly's name be Molly Umino, not Molly Osaka - after all, by
the naming conventions in this story, her husband's name is probably
Melvin Gurio Umino.

	Yep.

Although, admittedly, she could have kept her maiden
name, which would make it work out well - just a little detail that might
have been overlooked.

	Yeah, Molly kept her maiden name ... it's probably very uncommon
in the real world's Japan, but this is dubbed anime Japan ... actually
it's dubbed anime fanfiction Japan ...

On another note, it's interesting to speculate how
the different arcs from Sailor Moon would have been avoided.  The most
obvious change is probably that Vampeel never attacked Molly, or did it
while she wasn't on the phone with Serena, so Serena never became Sailor
Moon there.

	Actually, in this continuity, Alan and Ann never came to Earth
at all ... yet.
	I haven't really given much thought as to what happened with
Sailor Moon S, as I don't know enough about it (a major reason I haven't
used the Outer Planets Senshi in my stories, aside from a brief mention of
Haruka and Michiru in "One Moment Longer")

       And my only real complaint about the story is that it leaves me
really wanting more - and yet you're going to just leave us hanging there
for a while?  Aargh! :-)

	It's not by my choice, believe you me!

Chris Davies.