On Fri, 26 Apr 1996, Jennifer Lee Hom wrote:

  Mr. Davies - I tried to clarify some things.  If I got anything wrong, 
PLEASE tell me.  
  What I write here is based on what I understood the story to be saying.
  Slow afternoon.  I like to type.  What can I say? :)

recover their lost love for each other?  Would she *really* keep 
hitting him on the head with miscellaneous items she throws around? ;)
Would he really stick around to be hit on the head by those
miscellaneous items?  

One other thing that pops to mind ... Have they (Darien & Serena) seen
each other more recently than Serena & Molly have?  It seems like it,
or he  wouldn't be saying things like "Can't you throw anything ....".
It implies that she's been constantly doing that.

>From what I gathered, they live in the same city...Maybe they run into 
each other occasionally?  

  Darien writes an entertainment column, and thus reviews movies.  Molly, 
as an editor of some sort, has a desk job.  Darien's position requires 
him to go out; Molly's doesn't.  And since Molly also has a husband and 
young child, she probably doesn't have as much time to go out as Darien.  
So I think it's logical for Serena and Darien to occasionally run into 
each other.  

|>	"Artemis, don't be petty.  We don't know where Mina is, we don't
|>know where Lita, Raye, or Amy are.  We DO know where Serena is, and this
|>is where we're staying."

They didn't bother to keep track of the rest of the girls?

Good question....or was it just that keeping up with Serena was hard 
enough? :)

|>	After a few moments, the black cat recovered, and her features
|>twisted into an expression of anger.  "FINE!" she yelled.  "Who needs you!
|>I took care of her for months before you EVER showed up, and I did it
|>without the help of bloody Central Control!  Screw you, Artemis!"

I don't know if I could imagine Luna cursing, though it does seem 
appropriate here ...

Well, this isn't really cursing.  I couldn't imagine Luna actually saying 
cuss words.  And you're right, it _is_ appropriate.  

|>produce department.  Half the time, the food she bought here went to waste
|>as she put it in the fridge, ate out half the time, and forgot about her
|>fruits, vegetables, and meats.

What's she been eating, then? 

Half the time, she eats out.

Has the food she's been buying at the 

grocery store been going to waste? 

Yes, "half the time," as he says.

 Or just the stuff from the produce

department?  If it's the latter, it's the comment about meats that
threw me ... I don't usually find meat in the produce section. (She
hasn't been eating meats either?)

Half of whatever she buys goes to waste.  (Except ice cream, I'd assume - 
Chris, does she still like ice cream?)
 

|>began to solidify into another form.  First the clothes -- armor over the
|>vital anatomy, and weapons.  Then the physique -- somewhat more

Armor?

Referring to the clothes as armor.

  Weapons?  Sailor Moon?  With armor?  And weapons?  What kind?

She ends up using her tiara anyway ...

Maybe that's the weapon he's referring to?  And it _is_ part of her 
clothing, sort of.  Also, those two red jewels in her hair can amplify 
sounds of someone's crying (though you only see that a couple of times in 
the show); if you really wanted to, you might be able to consider those 
as weapons.

|>	"I am the hacked-off fighter for love and justice, SAILOR MOON!
|>On behalf of the moon, I will right wrongs and triumph over evil!  And
|>yes, you bloody git, THAT MEANS YOU!"

hacked-off?  git?  Hmmm, I think I'm going to have to figure out what
these mean ...

Hacked-off = ticked off
But 'git'?  I haven't heard that one before, either.

|>	Luna slowly poked her head around the corner.  Sailor Moon was
|>standing over the small pile of dust that the youma had left behind.

Pretty weak youma.  It didn't even say anything ...

Did it realy have time to? ^_^

|>for Darien.  Her Prince.  The man she'd loved, without realizing it, for
|>nearly seven years.

More than that, really.

True....
Well, maybe he meant that she hadn't realized it for seven years?

like it'll develop into an interesting story.  Will Darien go through
his stomach-ache transformations again when Sailor Moon's in danger?
Does he still have strange dreams about the moon princess, wondering
who he really is?

Ooh!!  I hadn't even thought of that!!!  Yeah, does Darien ever have those 
dreams anymore?

Oh well.  I'll try to be patient.  :)  I didn't mean for this list of
comments, I guess, to get so long.  If you've gotten this far, I'll
have to say again that I hope you'll get back to writing again soon.

And again, sir, if I've gotten anything wrong, let me know.

Take care, and good luck in whatever you're doing!  Hurry back!

I second that!!!

-joyce, Disciple of Kasumi
Joey-kun no iinazuke!!