I normally don't like Sailor Moon 'fics, simply because I can't get
into them and understand the characters well enough.  I could understand
Serena and Luna here: their thoughts, emotions, and feelings shine through
clearly...their friendship, strong, though shaken by their past...Serena's
love for a man she finds she can never have...Luna's concern and fear for
Serena, her internal conflict of wishing to be with Serena with her wish
not to hurt her...complex characters well portrayed.

Good job.

Nightelf
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