Heheh. I'm starting to like this series.....

Ahhh, my loyal public...

    A few nitpicks. Dialect made the convesation a little hard to 
understand now and then; keep it, but rework the more incomprehensible 
parts. A few sentences came out kinda flat....

Send me some private E-Mail and lemme know what parts are bugging you...

off in the hardware, but there wasn't.  It was a design flaw left in the
cheaper boomers.  During the first millisecond, the old man twisted out of
the boomers grip.  In the second millisecond the old man stepped to a
flanking position.  In the third millisecond the old man grabbed the
boomers out stretched arm.  If the boomer had been properly programmed it

Okay. I'll bite. What in Bob's name IS he?

How much fun would it be if I told you that?  All will be revealed, in 
small doses to string out the suspence....I'll try to put more of that in 
the next story . . .. whenever I get a chance to do any more writing . . 
. . hey wait-a-minute dead week is coming up!  (and we all know teachers 
never go over new stuff during dead week....)

What's the song (poetry?) that was included?

Life Loves A Tragedy.  Its by Poison.  Its on "Flesh & Blood".

Write another Ranma fic, by all means. Just don't neglect this series.

I think I know what I'm doing over summer vacation....
   -MJT