Yes yes, I know. "Hurry up with the new part!"
Well, the revision of part two took much longer than I had expected. But I
believe that I have it all wrapped up now. Now I tackle part 3. I intend
to do a thorough re-write of the last part. A small part of the story may
change direction as a result, but I'm not sure yet. I have a couple of
decisions I have to make about the conclusion of part 3 before I can launch
parts 4 and 5.
In any event, here's the new part 2. I tried to add some more tenderness
between Akane and Ranma (but since yours truly lacks in the "tenderness
towards females" department, I'm not sure how it will come off when read...).
C&C is welcome, appreciated, and in some cases matted and framed. ^_-
In any event, enjoy the story and thanks for reading.
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Later, | <witty .sig applied for> ^_^
Todd Hill |
Newberry College Computer Lab | Author: UY - The Prince and the Lecher
Newberry, South Carolina | Ranma 1/2 - Careful Destiny
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