Very good. A nice, serious piece that still maintains the humor level 
and fails to kill off any main characters. (That last quality, by the way 
appears to be increasingly rare on the ML. Cheer up, everyone!)
   Is the wedding fiasco something that occured in the anime, or a 
fanfic? I haven't even come close to finishing the series, so I'm afraid 
I'm a bit ignorant.....
   I liked the Ranma & Ryoga interaction. Good job portraying the 
dynamics between the two. "Is he my best friend or do I want to kill him?"
   Interesting take on Kasumi.
   This had better be continued.

-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

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