Subject: RE: [FanFic] The Nameless Saga - Part 5
From: "Couture, George, A1C, SAM-OPTS" <COUTUREG@comm.hq.af.mil>
Date: 4/18/1996, 6:40 AM
To: "fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net" <fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net>


[general snippage]

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(Scene changes to a harbor. Fishing boats, freighters, and the
occasional pleasure craft can be seen riding at anchor. Ranma,
(snip)

Genma: (solemnly) The Mermaid's Armpit. You will never find a
more wretched hive of scum and villainy.

[snip]

Kuga: There's three cabins. Meet me at pier 94 in fifteen minutes.

Ranma: (repeating) 94. Right. We'll be there.

[snip]
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Ummm...... were you by chance watching Star Wars while writing this?


Heh. Didn't think anyone would catch the "94" bit. No, this is my answer
to the "damn-fool idealistic" bit in "Careful Destiny"; although I did
model the tavern slightly after the MS Cantina. And the circumstances
match, as well.

 -Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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The only reason I caught the "94" bit was the fact that you mentioned the 
"wretched hive of scum and villainy" and it got me thinking.

As for the 'fic itself, I especially like the way you dealt with the 'yaki 
monster. I was ROFTL for that. Keep up the good work.



               Fozzy Bear
               (coutureg@comm.hq.af.mil)
               (fozzy@radix.net)