I thoroughly enjoyed this one.  Good job on the rewrite and keep 
them coming.  I want more.  I NEED more.  I HAVE to HAVE MORE!!!  
GYAAHHHHHH!!!!  Hurry UP!!

                                        Ryoga Hibiki
                        Wielder of the Bladed Belt, Friend of P-Chan

P.S.- I'm sorry, but good fanfics make me lose iot sometimes.  Orick!!  
Where's pt. 3 of Twilight??  I'm <WAITING>!!!