Subject: Re: Fanfic Taskwizards and such. . .
From: Ben Kosse
Date: 4/15/1996, 5:22 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

       However, this doesn't mean that different aspects can't be followed.
Example: I just finished reading a story (Yearnings), where Priss very
nearly forces Leon to have sex with her. Even though the only thing we see
Priss
doing with Leon is giving him the brush off, it made sense in the storyline
for this to happen.
Umm, Ben, they did have sex in "Yearnings".  Whether it was forced?  I
doubt >it.
     Well, not rape, and Leon did concent, but I think this quote basically
sums everything up:
                "Do it. Just do it," she croaked. 
                Damning himself, he did. 
     While he enjoyed it, he really didn't want to do it in that situation.

I know not all the comments I
make on other people's stuff gets used either.  As I said, whether to use it
or not is the writer's perogative.
     <WARNING: Upcoming inside joke.>
     You mean like Sylia's suit in my fic?

I just write, but I know where it's going to end up.
     I kinda thought that was implied. :)

Of course, it would help if I followed my own rules, right Jeanne? Remember
all the sloppy characterizations I used in Scared out of Control, and the
grammar and spelling mistakes you caught? ^_-
Well, it would be a little odd if you had Priss run screaming from a Boomer
while Nene waded in and took on all comers :)
     I wouldn't do that! Jeeze, ol' red eyes would take on the comers even
IF she was running off screaming. :)
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