Subject: Re: [FanFic] Marital Arts 3 (Ranma Lemon) - Part 2
From: marisa@gladstone.uoregon.edu (Marisa Price)
Date: 4/14/1996, 4:53 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


*****************************finis Marital Arts Episode 3



Cool! A lemon that is actually pretty good. One suggestion,
though, it might make the scene between Ranko and Ryoga a
little better if you explained what was going on in RYOGA's
mind at the time... all we see is Ranko's perspective....