| Subject: Re: [FanFic] Marital Arts 3 (Ranma Lemon) - Part 2 |
| From: marisa@gladstone.uoregon.edu (Marisa Price) |
| Date: 4/14/1996, 4:53 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
*****************************finis Marital Arts Episode 3
Cool! A lemon that is actually pretty good. One suggestion, though, it might make the scene between Ranko and Ryoga a little better if you explained what was going on in RYOGA's mind at the time... all we see is Ranko's perspective....