[Story snipped]

*Wing grabs a hold of NightElf*
WHY THERE!!!!??  Why did you end it there?!?!?!

*screams for a few moments* *sigh*

Oh well... back to my mail...

Only C&C is that at at some points, the thoughts of the characters kinda
get mixed up, mainly at the beginning.

Otherwise, it was a very smooth story that flowed.  Nice twist to the
virus thing, though I get the impression that it could happen, though not
due to viral mutation, but rather, inheritance of the curse. ;)

But... What of Moose and Shampoo?

*smiles*

Great story... now.. back to limbo...

*poof*

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 @}--,--'-------- "Steps" -------,--'---{@
            A moment passes by...
            A step taken without
              knowing why...
            Things to be are...
            ..Unkown.
 @}--,--'-------   Wing   -------,--'---{@

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