On Sun, 14 Apr 1996 15:59:36 -0400 <wwong8@calstatela.edu> said:

[Story snipped]

*Wing grabs a hold of NightElf*
WHY THERE!!!!??  Why did you end it there?!?!?!

So you would have precisely that kind of reaction.  ;)

*screams for a few moments* *sigh*

Oh well... back to my mail...

Only C&C is that at at some points, the thoughts of the characters kinda
get mixed up, mainly at the beginning.

Otherwise, it was a very smooth story that flowed.  Nice twist to the
virus thing, though I get the impression that it could happen, though not
due to viral mutation, but rather, inheritance of the curse. ;)

Hmmm...you've been reading Nerima by Night again, haven't you?  For those
unfamiliar with it, Ranma has a dream in which that happens...Oh my...that
would make an interesting fanfic...children growing up with their parents'
curses...schooltime, where water pistols are the most dangerous weapon...

     Ryunusuke:  Hey!  That's my truck! (sorry about the name spelling, folks)

     Futaba:  No, it isn't!  It's mine!

     Ryunusuke:  Oh yeah?   *SPLASH*  Girls don't play with trucks!

     Futaba-chan:  *SPLASH*  Well neither do pigs!

     R-chan:  Bwee....(leaps at Futaba-chan, but is caught in midair by
Hinako-sensei.)

     Hinako-sensei:  Shame on you two, acting like that!  Now go to detention!

     Futaba-chan (dejected):  Yes, Hinako-sensei...

     R-chan:  bwee...

Thank you.  For any and all concerned, may I work on this project over the
summer?  Please???  I don't know what direction it may take...it may be
random scenes from one person's perspective over the course of growing up,
or it may be the children and their parents living in Nerima, say...about
ten years after the events in Ranma 1/2.  This is too good an idea to pass
up.

But... What of Moose and Shampoo?

*smiles*

Great story... now.. back to limbo...

*poof*

--

@}--,--'-------- "Steps" -------,--'---{@
           A moment passes by...
           A step taken without
             knowing why...
           Things to be are...
           ..Unkown.
@}--,--'-------   Wing   -------,--'---{@

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  [*]    wwong8@calstatela.edu      [*]

Okay...For the record...

    I will not write any more on this.  The illness has passed.  I may
release the original ending (which was extremely saccharine and actually did
have the two pledging their love for each other...it was not really
believable) informally, but that's all.   I have given my blessing
for anyone willing to do a good job on it to write a lemon spoof of it,
provided they notify me first(so that there aren't more than one) and keep
my name off of the spoof.  Also, if anyone is willing to continue the story
in a logical, plausable, non-lemon manner and wants to write it, notify
me and get to it.

Nightelf
nwl9354@tamvm1.tamu.edu

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Nodoka:  I don't believe this...The baka throws away the perfect storybook
ending for something that...frustrating?   (pulls Grandma Akane's mallet out
of hammerspace)  I'LL KILL HIM!!

Shampoo2:  Take it easy, Nodoka...he probably had his reasons...By the way,
A-chan, you did a good job in that one.

A-chan (bows):  Bwee.

Nodoka (blue corona swirling around her):  Baka...Where are you?!?