From:        Erin Mills version 2.5, MILL0622@Badger.Snow.edu

   Naw, Just kidding. Thanks. I knew my math was going to be screwed 
up somewhere. Thanks also to everyone else who has said they enjoyed 
"Aftermath" and were kind enough to provide some VERY helpful 
suggestions. How helpful?
       
       Let's just say, the Beta won't be anything like the Alpha

Ah, OK. Will hold off on the review until the Beta release. ;>

I would agree with the people who say the intro setting up the situation 
strains crediblity; I'd also agree that it would probably be better to 
simply open with the situation as it is, and put just the most essential 
background pieces in as flashbacks, or something similar. 



Travis Butler
(The Professor, formerly of Myth and Magick!, Lawrence, KS;
 tbutler@tfs.net, now from the Wandering Powerbook;
 <http://www.tfs.net/personal/tbutler/>;
 Mac page <http://www.tfs.net/business/tbutler/>)

..Hello. I'm afraid I'm not sapient right now. Please leave a message, 
and I'll get back to you when I reach a higher evolutionary plane. Thank 
you.