On Fri, 12 Apr 1996, COLIN LOADER wrote:

Nicely written cyberpunkish drama. New proof that an exciting futuristic 
fanfic DOESN'T necessarily have to have gunfire on every page.

Thanks! ^_^

 The 

corporate intrigue angle is a fairly fresh one, at least with the 
hero/protagonist as the CEO. Well written, readable writting style. 

Hmm.. I think I can do better now that I am (semi)concious ^_-

Dialogue was believable and unstilted, and I particularly liked the end 
bit (the conversation in the sedan). I hope to see more,

OK, you will!

 soon.

Um.. err.. *sees Foxtrot warming up her cattle prod* Oh boy...

-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

Me too!

								- MW

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