Oh my...

If you can keep it going like that...The story grips your throat with an
iron vise and doesn't let go.  The "animals" and mutations are a little
unbelievable (such mutations usually happen over generations or inside
Jusenkyo springs) but my god...the descriptions of the characters...
the shantytown...I am reminded of the Mad Max series of movies, with its
dark, apocalyptic world.  Keep it up!

Nightelf
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