On Wed, 10 Apr 1996, PhoneyNT wrote:

Hmmm...Quite interesting...

I am curious as to how you intend to increase Akane's "Attractiveness Factor".

...Akane is trying to increase her own attractiveness by reading up and 
learning to act "sensual."  I leave it up to you as to whether
or not this is a mistake. (The Ranma cast has a knack for making
misconceptions and acting on them ^_^)

If there isn't a misunderstanding, it isn't Ranma :)

Akane has always tended to be rather inept at such things.

She's a clutz! ... Well, actually, she can be good, but needs to learn 
patience and pay attention to detail

Yep ^_^ At the end, I tried to compare her cooking skill to what her skill
in "attractiveness" is.

*Gasp* Run away! Run away!  <dodge suddenly materialized hammer> Ack!

:"Ranma will forget about those two idiots when I get through with him!  The
:best two ways to a man's heart are food and this!  I can be good at 'this' in
:no time!"

Heh, the two best ways to a man's heart ... so that he'll die quicker

Overall, the story looks good and has a lot of potential.  Whether you lemon
it or not, I look forward to the next installment.

Same here ... er ... wait a sec ... I haven't read it yet, but it sound 
really promising. ^_^

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