[snip most of the story]

Akane and Shampoo left the same bookstore, both paying 200% extra to get the
books past the checkout counters. Neither one saw the other.

"Ranma will love me so much afterwards, he will marry me and come back with
me to China!"

"Ranma will forget about those two idiots when I get through with him!  The
best two ways to a man's heart are food and this!  I can be good at 'this' in
no time!

     ROTFLMAO! That was such a great pair of lines to end the story with.
Now, as to it becoming lemon or not... It could either continue with the
subtle, non-graphical style you used to this point, but it's going to be
*REAL* hard.
It certainly has the possibility to become something on the style of the
_Martial Arts_ fanfic, or worse. I mean, here we have two girls trying to
win their way into Ranma's pants, and using the same material as a guide.
Surprise me, please, with how this one continues.
     (Of course, the *VERY SMALL* possibility for an Akane/Shampoo
"encounter" exists, and would be very interesting to see written, but I have
no talent for that sort of writing. :)
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