Nameless 4 is in the works, end date unknown. It all depends on how
long I feel like typing tomorrow...
I've also started the early revising of the first three episodes;
thanks to all who gave C&C. Anyway, my two RL test readers had different
opinions of the Dream Bit in part 3. The first said that it was blatantly
obvious and should be a bit subtler, and the second read it 4 times and
then asked me what the Dream was supposed to be about. I explained, and
he said I needed to make it more obvious.
PLEASE, please give me an opinion on this, or I'm gonna hafta take one
or the others advice; and I don' for the life of me know which is right.
I thought it was fairly simple, with a bit of thought, but then that's
what I though about tax forms. :-)
-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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