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Whoa....

   Finally, a cheerful fic! All these serious tales of gloom and death 
and personal anguish were beginning to get me down.
   Good work. The grammatical side needs some trimming, but, then, that's 
what alpha's are for.
   I seemed to detect a bit of Douglas Adams (or Terry Pratchett - I 
personally think they're the same person, or at least mind-linked) in the 
writing - the matter-of-fact asides, the general style and tone, etc. 
Since I'm a big fan of them (him?), I had a lot of fun reading this.
   Don't get me wrong, I still think you're clinically insane and need to 
be locked away for treatment....:-)

-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

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