Loved it.  Well-written, good use of the first-person perspective,
and great characterisation.  It's also dark and emotional, which
I like... MORE!

 Christopher Willmore			"There, Ranma, just like you wanted:
 4th Acolyte of Ryouga - 'Ghoul Killer'  A nice kitty-cat in the face!"
 Founding Member C.A.S.K.E.T.		 -Akane Tendo, shoving Shampoo-neko
		 A.R.S.E.		 into Ranma's face in the 'Cold 
 Ratiko@ManyMUCKs			 Competition' Viz dub...     
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