The story has become much more epic in scale; before, it just 
seemed like another Akane's cooking gone awry tales...
	I like the Shampoo/Kodachi interplay.
	You might want to rethink some of the dialogue.  Cologne and Tofu 
usually sound dignified and professional; in this chapter, they used more 
colloquialisms than they normally do.
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