Subject: Re: [FanFic] [FanFic]The Old Man
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 4/4/1996, 5:20 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net
CC: Fanfic ML <fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net>

   Good stuff. Give us more. MORE, damn your eyes.
   Anyway, C&C. Liked the Vet's dialogue, good use of slang and protalk 
without siding into cliche's and melodramatics. The script part was a 
little weaker, but still pretty good. 
   "Percy, my man." Try to tell me that isn't a RB reference.
   Anyway, I liked it. Send in what happens next.

-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

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