Okay, this is the first time I've read this story from begining to end, 
and I must say this is a really good story from beginning to end. The 
style, while different, is a style that is a pleasent one to read as it 
provides lot's of background and Info. The japapanese info add's to the 
story, but unlike some other writers who use japanese references you provide 
us with a good explination of the terms that you are using. The story 
itself read's very well with very few (if any) mistakes in grammer, which 
is suprising beacsue I've heard that this was a translation from 
Japanese...  

But I have a few questions on the plot in general... I'm surprised that 
Akane is going along with this plan. I know it was her Idea to begin 
with, but I still expect her to show a little more feelings of 
Jelously(although this could happen more in later chapters..). I'm also 
curious as to how you would handle Nodoka finding out about Ranma's 
curse. I know how Rumiko-sama hanled the event, but I'm curious as to how 
you would handle it....

All in all a great fic that I hope we see more of in the future...

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!