Subject: Re: [FanFic] we don't...part 2
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 3/30/1996, 3:26 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net
CC: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

On Fri, 29 Mar 1996, Lizsue wrote:


On Wed, 27 Mar 1996, White Wolf wrote:

Normally, I would have included the original story, and just commented on 
the bits that needed it.  But this one doesn't need much.

Mainly, I wanted to know why Ranma, Mousse, Shampoo, Akane, Kodachi, & 
Kuno would be working together!  And why not Ukyo too?

Who said they *all* had to be working together?  I think that part of the 
story would work just as well if only one or two of them were chasing the 
scroll and the rest were just chasing each other (for example, Akane and 
Ranma go after the scroll, Shampoo goes after Ranma, Mousse goes after 
Shampoo, etc.).

A couple of people have commented on the fact that all of them were together.
Lisue, in my opinion, comes closest. Here are the characters in the order 
they joined up, along with their motivation.

Ranma - Desire to get away from the Nerima madhouse, gain a new 
        technique, show up Ryoga.
Shampoo - Follow Ranma, mild interest in scroll.
Kodachi - Follow Ranma, mild interest in scroll.
Akane - I'm not leaving Ranma alone with them, keep the peace between 
        Ryoga & Ranma.
Mousse - I'm not leaving Shampoo alone with them, accidents happen when 
         you travel: maybe to Ranma?, mild interest in scroll.
Kuno - I'm not leaving Akane alone with them, show off immence wealth, 
       mild interest in scroll.
Genma - (enters in part 3) New and interesting food, mild interest in 
        scroll.

And that's the story. Literally.
(Mike winces at the two accidental puns)

A second Fanfic, no title as of yet, will be appearing in one or two 
days. It's gonna be in the rough, first-draft version, so please give it 
a ton of C&C. Thanks.

-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

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