Subject: Re:AWAKENINGS.......though this is not final |
From: lizsue@mtc.ultranet.com (Lizsue) |
Date: 3/29/1996, 11:14 PM |
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net |
On Thu, 28 Mar 1996, Chan Wei Lik wrote:
If Shampoo could become unconfused so easily, she would have left Nerima
long ago.
I thought it was a really good story, but I see your point. Maybe if it took place over a longer time (suppose Shampoo talked to Ukyou after thinking over her nightmare for a week or two) it would be more realistic.