Subject: Re: [FanFic] we don't...part 2
From: lizsue@mtc.ultranet.com (Lizsue)
Date: 3/29/1996, 11:14 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net


On Wed, 27 Mar 1996, White Wolf wrote:

Normally, I would have included the original story, and just commented on 
the bits that needed it.  But this one doesn't need much.

Mainly, I wanted to know why Ranma, Mousse, Shampoo, Akane, Kodachi, & 
Kuno would be working together!  And why not Ukyo too?

Who said they *all* had to be working together?  I think that part of the 
story would work just as well if only one or two of them were chasing the 
scroll and the rest were just chasing each other (for example, Akane and 
Ranma go after the scroll, Shampoo goes after Ranma, Mousse goes after 
Shampoo, etc.).


Otherwise, you have captured the feel of a Callahan's, but it is *not* 
Callahan's.  It is clearly a different kind of place, with a different 
crowd, with their own style.  Bi-weekly fights, a band instead of 
individual players, all of them young, and...  they may not all have 
their own story.  Spider has always been a favorite of mine, and this is 
a worthy tribute to him.